While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The environment is a growing concern nowadays, with many pointing out at alarming raise in temperature as the most serious issue, while others debate that the consequences of deforestation aggravate more on the ecosystem. Personally, I believe that both factors are equally dangerous for the planet.
The average temperature of the Earth is increasing at a fast peace melting glaciers and evaporating lakes and ocean. As a result, heavy floods and drought are devastating many nations across the globe, threating local economies. Weather forecast in the last 10 years shows that overall temperature has increased by 4°C around the globe and especially in Africa, where it is aggravating water scarcity and loss of crops as well. According to the UN, as a consequence this year more than 20% of people in the region will suffer from hunger, and the percentage is expected to grow in the following years.
Another rising concern is deforestation. Many people argue that it can devastate the environment and have serious repercussion on citizens' health. It is widely recognized that trees cut down carbon dioxide levels and produce oxygen, a vital gas for human body. Therefore, a decrease in forests areas can deteriorate air quality and weaken public' health as well. In China, for example, smog has increased by 5% as a consequence of substantial deforestation and a national survey reveals that the percentage of lung disease patients has doubled in 10-year period.
However, I believe that both issues can profoundly devastate our ecosystem. On the one hand, climate change is threating different species thus reducing biodiversity of the planet. In Antarctic, for example, penguins are perishing due to the change in temperature. Similarly, ocean fauna is changing as well, especially the wheels, which population diminishes every year. On the other hand, life on the Earth is absolutely impossible without oxygen. The scientists from NASA hypothesize that, if deforestation continues to grow, a lack in oxygen will make the world not inhabitable within 80 years.
In conclusion, although global warming is viewed by many as the most worrying environmental issue, deforestation plays an equal role as the loss of trees will curb oxygen production putting the survival of humans of humans under threat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31335149864 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96955224559 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602179836512 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5723271346 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157747149512 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422782292342 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447526757515 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867678497359 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390822275282 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.