Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely accepted that the opinions and attitudes of the general public have been governed by the mass media and its holders, only limited ways available for people to correct this. from my point of view this statement holds a valid ground because the media affect individuals’ thinking in various ways.
People get information from the social networking but what is published, what is broadcasted … completely depend on the targets of who control the media. They works to generate profits so they just disseminate the information that help them to achieve their goals. Withal, with the large- scale expansion of social media, they have power to manipulate the public’s ideas and attitudes towards many issues by taking advantage of herd behaviour or even by using the reputation of influencers. For instance, when some products and services are advertised by famous singers or movie stars and become hot trend in general public, an individual can resist the temptation to purchase them inspite of their unnecessary. As a result, they are controlled by the media.
Nowadays, although some people are becoming more judicious about the information they taking in , only few incredible platforms available for them to authenticate the facts in media briefs. Additionally, in a present juridical system acting about freedom of press , loopholes upon acting on legal procedure for any kind of misbehaviour in the media are inevitable. Furthermore, governments hesitate to pass the laws against spreading fake news because in some occasions it must be drawback to them such as lost in elections.
In a nutshell, people who dominate the media are also able to control public’s ideas and it is hard to rectify this fact.Therefore, people should be more considerate toward the information presented to us through the media.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... that the opinions and attitudes of the general public have been governed by the mass media an...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...s available for people to correct this. from my point of view this statement holds a...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndividuals’ thinking in various ways. People get information from the social n...
^^^
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
... targets of who control the media. They works to generate profits so they just dissem...
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Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... or movie stars and become hot trend in general public, an individual can resist the temptatio...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lt, they are controlled by the media. Nowadays, although some people are becom...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ous about the information they taking in , only few incredible platforms available...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cal system acting about freedom of press , loopholes upon acting on legal procedur...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ack to them such as lost in elections. In a nutshell, people who dominate the ...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lost in elections. In a nutshell, people who dominate the media are also a...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...eas and it is hard to rectify this fact.Therefore, people should be more considerate towa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in general, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2457337884 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90301728145 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8573630296 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.727272727 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225781501776 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899770576608 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826003560657 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145178615338 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706806900959 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... that the opinions and attitudes of the general public have been governed by the mass media an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...s available for people to correct this. from my point of view this statement holds a...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndividuals’ thinking in various ways. People get information from the social n...
^^^
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
... targets of who control the media. They works to generate profits so they just dissem...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... or movie stars and become hot trend in general public, an individual can resist the temptatio...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lt, they are controlled by the media. Nowadays, although some people are becom...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ous about the information they taking in , only few incredible platforms available...
^^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cal system acting about freedom of press , loopholes upon acting on legal procedur...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ack to them such as lost in elections. In a nutshell, people who dominate the ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lost in elections. In a nutshell, people who dominate the media are also a...
^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...eas and it is hard to rectify this fact.Therefore, people should be more considerate towa...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in general, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2457337884 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90301728145 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8573630296 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.727272727 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225781501776 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899770576608 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826003560657 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145178615338 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706806900959 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.