Why do people attend colleges or universities?
A healthy and prosperous society is the product of the contribution of the educated and knowledgeable population. It has been widely approved that educational institutes have played a crucial role to put a society on such a success road. These centers, by offering various benefits including the development of social skills and future job attainment, encourage individuals to attend.
Participating in universities opens up an opportunity to people to foster their social competencies. One of the most worthwhile skills helping people benefit from both an excellent future life and a lucrative career is to have a proper communicational skill. Students with different beliefs and level of intelligence usually take part in a same class where they need to collaborate effectively with each other to get a class project or an assignment done. To achieve a desirable outcome, students learn how to interact with classmates directly, how to embrace opposite ideas without being distressed, and how to help their peers who suffer from low or moderate learning abilities to perform acceptably. Therefore, colleges and universities provide students with a challenging environment where they can not only enhance some societal capabilities but also get prepared to appear in the society potently.
The answer to the central question that how attending university and finding a decent job interrelate lies in the fact that colleges supply ample knowledge to people. Educational institutes always recruit professional teachers with strong backgrounds. They are dedicated enough to convey all they know to the students. Apart from theoretical information, professors usually endeavor to hold some workshops to let the students experience some practical applications. Moreover, teachers sometimes introduce their pupils to national and international seminars to let them give a speech in front of experts to both receive some valuable pieces of advice and overcome the fear of public speaking. Thus, not only theoretical knowledge but also practical experience, like two powerful assets, enriches the students’ background to get a lucrative career.
To sum up, among all reasons people usually adopt to pursue higher education, I believe that improvements in social abilities as well as wining an appropriate career have substantial contributions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...um up, among all reasons people usually adopt to pursue higher education, I believe that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62994350282 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19269155881 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624293785311 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1523899951 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.866666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118275572791 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381799406562 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569981114514 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607023071285 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236070213503 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.