The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest ?
Nowadays, the prevalence of internet has made a considerable contribution to all aspects of people’s life. It is one of the greatest technological breakthroughs which have changed the modern life in many different ways. No one can deny that despite a lot of advantages, internet has caused plenty of problems in our society.
First and foremost, internet has negative effect on the interaction between people. Youngsters choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships. Parents and their children are always on the virtual world as an alternative of caring about each other. Another noteworthy point is that internet leads to the scarcity of physical activities among people of different generation. Adults usually try to do online shopping, or using social media while children squander most of their time on surfing the internet or playing game. This can increase the possibility of suffering from obesity, muscle diseases or short-sighted.
These issues can not be neglected and we should tackle the problems as soon as possible. Initially, everyone has to gain understanding about the drawbacks and consequences of using internet too much. The local government area can hold workshops or activities or campaign to raise people’s awareness. Moreover, families have to spend more time with each other and try to make their children to take part in social activities instead of sitting all day and surfing the internet
To sum up, much as internet has facilitated people’s lives in many ways but there are also some unavoidable hardships. Individuals should take action to solve these problems in order to have a better lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3273381295 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01255073528 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7247805097 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144682462673 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463390296086 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296735487556 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852393290901 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175234991949 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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