The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare people to work in the future

Essay topics:

The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life.

Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare people to work in the future.

In this fast-changing world, unemployment and job security have become one of the most debatable dilemmas among people. In this essay, first the causes of this pandemic have been discussed and in the second section some approaches which can bring the change over are mentioned.

Gone are the days when people could find and pursue their favourit vocation without any strain and extrinsic threat. In fact, the world and following by that the world of working has been completely changed due to technology development which has led to that company directors imply automation systems o as to foster product manufacturing efficiently. Generally, although industry flourishment has raised the economic growth rate, it has dramatically diminished the employment rate due to the increment of machines and robot roles in exchange for human resources. Take a packaging manufacturer having up to one hundred labor as an example where automatic machines are used since they are more lucrative and productive. However, they compromise the job position and security of human workers. Moreover, the world is facing overpopulation crises endangering the future of the world. Indeed, nowadays, because life expectancy has increased due to the increment of advanced technologies, the death rate becomes lower, often perceived as catastrophic. In this situation, job demand becomes a keen competition and the unemployment rate would exceed. For example, India, the most populated country in the world, is associated with an unemployment dilemma and job-hopping has practically become a way of life.

From my perspective, there are several measures that governments should adopt so as to mitigate this global crisis. First, authorities should restrict people having more than one job and also, allocate sufficient funds to institiudes to employ efficient labor and thereby increase job opportunities. The other effective approach is that governments should pose, implement and enforce incentive financial supports including subsidies and loans to stimulate both domestic industry productivity and the employment rate. Take a factory. Which is enforced to pay ten percent of its outcome as tax as an example. The government could cut the tax rate to drive company directors to employ more workforces and scales up the business frame.

To sum up, although there are many contributing factors which affect the future work of people, governments could take several measures to tackle this issue.

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Average: 6.2 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in many cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48943661972 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13576256178 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6777681017 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2307692308 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315113671157 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130434202992 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11108395743 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193735035381 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795519771905 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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