Would you prefer an interesting job with low pay or a boring job with a high salary? Explain.
I am strongly surprised when a person asks me if I will choose an interesting job with a low salary instead of a boring ones with a high pay. Everyone knows that money is very important for supporting our lives and our occupation generally helps us earn money. So, while many people maybe prefer a boring job with a high income, I will choose my favourite job despite its low salary. I will explain clearly the reasons why I choose this in the following essay.
When I do a job that I am favourite, I always feel happy and creative in my working. I mean I get ready for working continuously like a machine and do not feel tired after hard working hours. Because of my great passion to job, I always try to have a development in my work day by day. Although that job is only paid a low salary, I can improve hard and soft skills of my expertise, which a lot of money can not buy, so as to get more opportunities in the future.
For instance, as I graduated from medical school three years ago, I had not had many experience then, so I decided to work at a public hospital with a low income but I could do my favourite deparment. These days, I can be confident about my expertise to work at a private hospital with a better income while I still do my favourite job.
On the other hand, if I follow an occupation that I am not interesting, I will feel insipid, even though it can make me face a physical as well as mental crisis. For a long time, I not only can work ineffectively but also can not stand of the bore in working, in spite of its high salary. Perhaps the end result could be that I quit that job. An important thing is when I do an interseting job with a low pay, I can improve my income by taking part-time works. It is not difficult for finding an extra work in the busy ciy like Ho Chi Minh city.
Therefore, we only live once on earth, so let's do something that makes us happy. I want to say that I still choose my favourite job although it is paid with a low salary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i mean, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13953488372 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50941247024 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498708010336 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7657137487 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2352941176 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327833728005 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112938836298 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127132524969 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191120983535 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116791174621 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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