Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Stepping into the 21st century when human beings are entitled to a wide range of chances to improve the standard of living, technology has been arousing people around the world’s concern. As a matter of fact, it is a dilemma of whether computers are a vital invention or not. As far as I am concerned, the result of this innovation is aligned with specific circumstances.
There is no denying that the advent of the computer derives numerous advantages, among which the primary one is that it is more likely to access a range of cutting-edge knowledge. This is because higher is the speed that netizens can connect with the global village to converse or engage in worldwide communication as well as gain know-how from the latest news. For instance, it is unlikely uncommon for multinational companies organizing distance-conferences on different online services, thereby creating an efficient result with flexible time and less complementary process. Another merit which should be cited is that the labour-saving machines can not only alleviate the flawed products but also boost productivity. As a result, the computer is a profound contribution to benefits.
Having said that, the aforementioned arguments can also be considered from the opposite angle, countless detrimental outcomes are attributed to the computing-related use. Firstly, computer users might be offensive when dealing with security issues and cybercrimes due to a host of significant information being fringed and used for deleterious purposes. Secondly, overusing the hi-tech devices takes its tolls on the physical health of individuals. In other words, they indulging into the virtual world are less likely take up exercise that leads to severe diseases such as nearsightedness and obesity.
In light of these facts, the introduction of computers has its demerits and merits, thus, the significance of it relies on distinct conditions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4381270903 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25669744247 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655518394649 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.135692852 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124423622193 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395474198498 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272585960547 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650925873209 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024159694083 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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