Computers has gained in popularity in the few past centuries thanks to its sustainable benefits. However, the issue whether computer is of the most paramount importance is still an argument. In my opinion, I partly agree with this view.
On the one hand, no one can deny the vital role of computer. Firstly, computers are a giant storage, which stores a great deal of information and data which cannot be kept in human memory. Moreover, such documents remains in the computers forever. Secondly, computers are regarded as a miraculous devices which can do almost complex calculations with high accuracy or do multiple tasks at the same time. Excel and Pascal are typical examples. When people input data and equations, these programs supply an exact results just in a few seconds. Last but not least, people can enjoy diverse ways of entertainment such as playing games, watching films or listening to music.
On the other hand, there are different products which makes life far easier, namely television, mobile phones and The internet. Televisions contributes to not only enrich people's knowledge but also entertain by worldwide programmes. In other words, watching both local and foreign programmes helps people get access to latest knowledge as well as relax with interesting channels. Regarding mobile phones, individuals can overcome geographical barriers thanks to this invention. Being able to keeping in touch with others with a long distance may enhance people's personal and professional relationships. Another indispensable innovation is the Internet which is benefical for human in all respects. In education, for instance, educational websites or programs are always available to students. They can also download a variety of materials for free. In terms of business, multinational companies may organize virtual conferences on different online services, which generates efficient results with flexible time and less complementary process.
In conclusion, although computers play a pivotal part in the modern world, there are other crucial technological devices and applications which are profound contribution to create the brand-new world dramatically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'device'?
... computers are regarded as a miraculous devices which can do almost complex calculation...
Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
...uations, these programs supply an exact results just in a few seconds. Last but not lea...
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...eign programmes helps people get access to latest knowledge as well as relax with interes...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56495468278 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99253825098 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66163141994 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1064019846 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.95 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111321814414 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321679833937 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305449143907 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685221968559 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377953691443 0.056905535591 66% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.