You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Family planning plays a crucial role in human's life. Nowadays, it is observed that more couples are planning to have their child in later age. I believe that, extending a family is an important decision which has to be taken considering many aspects but delaying it should not be considered as the better option. The bases of my view will be discussed in the following essay.
On one hand, many thinks, having a child in their early age has many disadvantages. Firstly, it is considered that a couple should plan for a baby only when they are financially stable as upbringing of a kid is pretty much expensive in today's era. Secondly, many thinks, having a responsibility of a child in the initial years of their married life can ruin their fun and enjoyment . For example, one of my friend married her girlfriend two years back and they don't want to have baby before their 30's as they believe a kid's responsibility will restrict them in fulfilling their goal of the World tour.
On other hand, it is believed that having a children in early age is necessary and advantageous as well. If people will prefer to have a child in their old age, the generation gap will be more. The generation gap may have a lot of disadvantages. Since, human life expectancy is decreasing, there is higher probability of leaving your kid in early stage of their life itself.
To conclude, I believe that, although, there are several aspects to be considered before planning to extend your family but it is better to have a children in early age itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed life can ruin their fun and enjoyment . For example, one of my friend married h...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... her girlfriend two years back and they dont want to have baby before their 30s as t...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...baby before their 30s as they believe a kids responsibility will restrict them in fu...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ibility will restrict them in fulfilling their goal of the World tour. On othe...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
... other hand, it is believed that having a children in early age is necessary and advantage...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...nd your family but it is better to have a children in early age itself.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68634686347 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73844497523 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512915129151 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7651513513 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153954415266 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628359331054 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445020970731 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102772324863 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305035273956 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.