You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Music is played in every society and culture in the world today.
Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In modern world, music plays a vital role both in the society and on an individual life. Music comprises a major part in any culture as well. To some, music is a emotion played in tunes; but many views the destructive message music can bring.
According to psychology, music can elevate our moods. Happy songs can remind us of pleasent times and sad songs can ruin our days. Good, happy and vibing music can be heard in gatherings like birthday party or wedding ceremony. Even in the earlier times, the opera was enjoyed by most elites. Composers like Beathovan, Brams, Bach have presented us with new and more enjoyable music throughout history. In the time of kings, their tale of wars and achievement was sung in tune. So, in a sense, the effect of music is as old as time itself. But can music become a negative influence?
Firstly, if we do an YouTube search, we will find many songs that are of degratory nature. From the lyrics to the video itself is full of humiliating words and scenes toward a race or a gender. This type of songs can brainwash any person into hating individuals for their skin colour or their sexuality.
Secondly, in today's world, the internet can grant us access to anything and this includes the quality of music we expose ourselves to. In this particular decade, we will found the new generation who have no idea about the talents in their own culture but enjoys music, plays or literature from other countries. Music from the USA, Korea, Japan can be heard in many stores of Bangladesh. Although this does not affect any particular person, but has the capability to destroy the entire music industry of our country.
Fortunately, we should not worry because the song producers of the world has wake up. They are writing songs that will enrich the mind and heart of the young generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... any culture as well. To some, music is a emotion played in tunes; but many views...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70716510903 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42411643405 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8181764548 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.55 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256625164309 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079901818141 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694562218262 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144738175153 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11112347726 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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