Young people in distributed economies tend to become violent causing distraction to life and property. Wha are the causes, impacts and remedies of such problem.
It is undoubtedly true that, with the advent of globalisation demands of people are touching to the sky and money is the factor, which help the people to survive easily on earth. Nowadays, individuals confronting several issues that can cause serious harm to life. Hence, unbalanced economic status has dangerous impact on human life or not? Its a big matter of debate. In this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon, effects and suggest some proactive measures to eradicate this problem from society.
To begin with, the first step is to understand why is this happening? There are varieties of factor are responsible, firstly, contemporary youth is facing the biggest issue; unemployment. This reasons they are unable to meet their basic necessities as well as their modern desire like smart phones, branded cars and other accessories. Therefore, lack of opportunities regarding earnings has great influence on life and they do act negatively.
Moving ahead, this factor has grave consequences on human life. Frustrating lifestyles leads to breaking relationships between family members and they show aggressiveness in their behaviour. This factor resulting in detrimental influence on health like, person feel isolated and sometimes can suffer from some psychological problems like depression and anxiety. Moreover, when person are not satisfied from their needs, they do criminal act like stealing and robbery.
It is certainly true that, every problem has several solutions. Mainly, government should provide job opportunities to masses to earn well for their life as well as meet their needs. Secondly, counselling by government to people more aware about how to solve dispute regarding money and rehabilitate the people by giving more information regarding life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48745519713 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92981759551 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9927195681 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101014755262 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330816980028 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321056475504 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629678674899 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409457704225 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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