Young people in disturbed economics tend to become violent causing destruction to life and property. What are the causes, impacts and remedies of such problem.
Money plays a vital role in everyone's life. Without money one cannot fulfill their three basic need: food, clothe and shelter. The given topic asserts that is disturbed economics is the main reason behind the destruction of life or property? In this essay, i will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical that individual could implement to reduce this problem.
The first step is to understand why is this happening? Broadly speaking, there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost is unemployment. Some countries like India has the lack of jobs and industries. Due to this reason young people have no money to fulfill their basic needs. A part from that, every person has their own desire; so, to achieve their desire they also need money.
The trend could have many detrimental effects. Firstly, young people have conflicts with their family members because they didn't give money to them. Infact, this has resulted in low self-esteem. Young people than mentally disturbed. Consequently, they tried to get money from doing illegal work like crime. Lastly, it also effect the health Of the people.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to do counseling to make general public aware from these problems. It would also be possible if government provide good jobs to people and also enhance the industries. With the help of this all people get jobs easily, and they also fulfill their desire.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution. So, if government take initiative and also provide job placement to the people than this problem should be vanished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, so, while, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99667774086 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43591610409 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6867069091 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3913043478 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0869565217 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112322711676 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339114228137 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459657249798 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674959074872 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024347523188 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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