Traveling is the most important part of human's life. In the 21st century, thanks to the improvement of the tourism industry, people have an enormous tendency to travel to a foreign country. while, there are some people who still cling to the belief that traveling is a beneficial process if it occurs just in the scope of their own country. On the other hand, however, there are those who state that people benefit more from traveling to another country. I firmly believe that traveling to a foreign country not only make the people familiar with some traditional products of a foreign country, but also they can have a lot of great fun in that country. The following reasons cogently illustrate my viewpoint.
In general, no one can cast a doubt on the fact that the improvement of the tourism industry can bring a multitude of benefits for us in today’s world. People all around the world are able to travel to another country to be familiar with the traditional products of the other countries. Buying a traditional product from a country helps us to be familiar with the culture of the country as well. As an illustration, when I was a young boy, my father and I went to India because of my father’s job. There are a lot of eccentric spicy foods in that country. These delicious foods were persuaded me to search about the culture of Indian people. I have found that the taste of these foods lies at the root of the early settlement of people in this region. Hence, this valuable information helped me to give a presentation in my history class at my university.
Another reason that clearly demonstrates the effect of travelling to another country on people is related to an investigation that an online magazine has recently reported. This magazine has shown that the amount of population who travel to a foreign country is increasing and this trend is anticipated to rise dramatically in the long run. This is because there are a lot of people who prefer to spend their time in another country for having fun. due to the advanced technology, there are numerous facilities in a developed country that provide a situation that any person can feel a sense of enjoyment in these countries. For example, there is an extraordinary zoo in Africa. In this place, unlike the ordinary zoo that animals are kept in the cage, people are kept in the cage and the variety of animals are free. This fantastic place attracts the vast majority of people every year that this fact verifies the abovementioned reason that almost all people benefit from travelling to another country because maybe these kinds of facilities are not in their country.
To sum up, owing to aforementioned reasons, it appears to be reasonable to draw a well-founded conclusion that although there are likely to be many attractive places in our country, the advantages of travelling to another country are more than that of. Being familiar with the culture of different countries and having a great fun in these countries are the most important souvenirs of travelling to other countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...endency to travel to a foreign country. while, there are some people who still cling ...
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Suggestion: Due
...time in another country for having fun. due to the advanced technology, there are n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, in general, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 41.998997996 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2543.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 527.0 315.596192385 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82542694497 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77732232447 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445920303605 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.9 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8843086373 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.565217391 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9130434783 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1848705724 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560585251193 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395563279757 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120175243873 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141609582197 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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