At this moment in time, despite the fact that first eye contact with strangers would reveal something fundamental, it doesn’t communal for all types of people as well as characteristics. As far as I’m concerned, I don’t lean towards this perception as well.
Nowadays, vast majority of people tend to create a sturdy connection with each other and make a sustainable contribution later on. In addition, social media has been creeping into our life and eluding from making a relationship in this atmosphere is so common.It is so conspicuous that having a first eye contact might not represent all the edges. Indeed, it stands to reason that putting up a friendship doesn’t make spontaneously for the first time. That is, lots of efforts and interactions are needed in order to get someone knows better.
On the other hand, some would argue that one of the most vital attribute of person is having a good ability to judge and recognition person’s personality in the first eye contact. Furthermore, full compromise has been available among this group in which a succinct interaction stems from being smart enough to distinguish useful and destructive results of any connections. From my point of view, encompassing lots of meeting and evaluate pros and cons of someone’s behavior give rise people to distinguish between right and wrong connection and also it’s not limited to the first sight.
Overall, researchers have been realized undisputed evidence of how the relationship develops. Hence, preserving of meeting and sustain it to the future is so effective nowadays. Also, relying on first sight puts a strain on people to go under the surface of someone’s personality and know better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
...ionship in this atmosphere is so common.It is so conspicuous that having a first e...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9737170126 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9825691939 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109376071254 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372066155015 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260155644032 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643345807851 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205923753361 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.