In your opinion, why is the circus still a popular form of entertainment in the modern electronic age?
Despite the prevalence of technology in all aspects of our lives from studying to entertaining. Circus is still one of the oldest forms of entertainment and It was a
quintessential part of the Roman civilization. Moreover\ \ however,and live theaters survived in a prosperous way in the twentieth century due to varied reasons that will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, automated entertainment ways like video games and play station or technology-driven games wouldn’t convey the amusement a person needs. In contrast, live plays like mimes and carnivals are common/familiar/favorable for maximum enjoyment. For example, a study by Qatar university showed that children who spend plenty of time on video games are more likely to experience depression compared to children who attend open theaters like zoos and parks.It is clear that All forms of physical plays are important, especially to our kids.
Secondly, physical games are certainly more appealing than technological games for adults and children.Thus,live performances like circus involve different types of activities for the spectators such as clown competitions, shows of trained animals and musician band dancing.Moreover, it provides a wide variety of other features like food and beverages. To cue evidence, according to London's cancer clinic a healthy person needs to watch or engage in any physical activity for happiness.
In conclusion, physical activities are still popular in recent years although there is a tremendous shift in our lives because of the development in technology.Thus, it is likable by people of all ages for optimal pleasure ,satisfaction and attraction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62055335968 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55799231571 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4029973778 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964011348229 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454041415161 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702911297317 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653241732354 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642076254314 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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