01/10/2017Popular events like to football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that patriotism can be expressed in a peaceful way and bilateral relations among nations improved by organizing sports meets involving popular sports such as football, cricket, rugby and the like. This essay agrees with this notion. Firstly, this essay will shed some light on the fact that sporting events are a characteristic of superior civilization and secondly discuss how such occasions signify amiability in international relations.

Sports events are a means to generate and release strong emotions in the populace in a more or less chivalrous way. Sports have evolved from the cradle of civilization; the very nature of sports portray freedom, charisma, control, perseverance, spirit, and grace. As such, the international games tournaments are the forebearer of the message of peace, allowing nations to compete fiercely for victory while at the same time accepting defeat with humility and respect. For example, in this year's Twenty-over Cricket World Cup, India lost to Pakistan in the final match which was a nerve-wrecking clash between the two teams. Although, frustrated by the loss, Indians congratulated the Pakistanis for their win and took home valuable lessons from the game in order to bounce back in the future. It was a spectacular show of maturity from the Indians, there was no bad blood involved.

International games can be observed as a gesture of goodwill among nations that can pave the way for stronger bilateral ties in the future. They provide a joint platform where people can come together and cheer for their country releasing all their patriotic fervour. The host nation has a duty to make its guests comfortable and the visitors can enjoy the hospitality that is offered. In this way, such occasions serve the purpose of improving international relations and defusing tensions. Therefore sports events are undoubtedly a step in the positive direction for the betterment of bilateral ties between the nations involved. A fitting example is the resumption of dialogue between once bitter rivals India and Pakistan after the Cricket World Cup that was hosted by India this year.

In conclusion, it is fair to say that sporting events between nations are gestures of paramount significance that are symbolic of amiability in mutual relations and continuation of peace process.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3064516129 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8895586308 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9599230728 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.375 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173925997233 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567636386426 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439429720815 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103523452333 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359634303548 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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