The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer
Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he depicted a herd of mammoths on the walls of his cave to these days
when he can create beautiful pictures and even make coffee by use of computer technologies without leaving his favorite chair. The 20th century
made huge steps in developing computer technologies and reached many goals that made our life much easier. What should we expect in the 21st
century?
First of all, I think that the pace of our life will speed up: we will move faster from one place to another, from one continent to another using high
speed jet airplanes. Second of all, I believe that we will be able to do many things that take much time now without leaving our house. Computers
will be everywhere including out clothes. Many people will have chips and mini computers inserted in their heads to hold huge amount of
information and have a quick access to it.
But what will be the most amazing thing in the 21st century is the flights to the outer space and Mars that will be available to all people. Scientists
say that Mars has many things similar to the Earth's. Moreover, they say that with the help of modern technology people can artificially create
conditions that will allow people to live there on the constant basis.
To sum up, I am sure that many amazing changes will be brought by the 21st century. Furthermore, I think that with the help of the contemporary
technologies people can do many things that were even difficult to imagine a century ago. So, nowadays it is rather difficult and even impossible to
imagine all changes that will happen in the next decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71724137931 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40487020719 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0119887735 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199205849422 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800566861489 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631464199355 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673408457396 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464864719213 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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