In this sophisticated and progressive world with improving technology quickly, movies and television have a significant role in the lives of people in a society. Movies and television always try to show the correct thing for people due to effecting in people’s characteristics. I strongly agree that television should always show the audience that good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.
I have several reasons to support my idea, first of all, do you see bad people are punished and good people are awarded in the real-life? Movies and television reflect the real-life in some constant. In our real-life, although there are some cases that good people don’t take award or bad people don’t get punished. But that makes only a small part of life. People do whatever they want and according to them, they get what they deserve.
Secondly, movies and television are public media and it will affect people’s lives. Especially for teenagers because they are not mature and they don’t have any standard in their life, therefore, programs for television and movies will have a great influence on teenagers. They will learn of TV and movies who could be a good person or a bad person. They learn what should they do and what they shouldn’t do.
Thirdly, televisions and art programs are a reflection of the director’s mind. They make according to their skills and they show their proficiency and sophistication in their art. They are not bound up to make something that is beneficial and educative for people, they could make comics, interesting and even educational programs for people. Almost most of people want to see interesting movies and enjoy free time far from their problems and work in real life.
In conclusion, I should say I completely support this idea that good people always should be admired or bad people should be punished. According to my reasons that I recommended above, TV and movies have a great influence on people’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...educational programs for people. Almost most of people want to see interesting movies and enjo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10334346505 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92395212546 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471124620061 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5018838725 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2777777778 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0486286603583 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200614026075 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292442598719 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0304145344238 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277601794152 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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