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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays
than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There are countries where more people are deciding to live by themselves than they
did in the past. This essay would argue that this is a positive development because
these people’s actions are not restricted by their housemates, and when people live
alone, it helps a country’s economy.
When people live alone, they don’t need to accommodate others who are living with
them. This can reduce the stress of having to resolve any confusion that may occur
due to people having different ideas of how a house should be maintained, and it
can help them to save time by not having to wait for others to finish using
appliances or equipment that they need to use. For example, the Guardian reported
that families of four or more take an extra 20 minutes on average to get ready in the
morning than a person who lives alone.
As well as that, a country’s economy will grow if more people are living alone. This is
because these people are no longer sharing bills and therefore more money is being
spent. Also, to avoid loneliness, these people tend to get out of the house more
often and engage in social activities with their friends and family, which results in
more spending and aids the development of the economy even further. For instance,
a survey carried out at University of Tokyo found that students who stayed in one-bedroom
accommodation were 37% more likely to go out in the evenings than those
who lived in shared accommodation.
In conclusion, the increasing trend of people living alone is beneficial as these
individuals have freedom from the stresses of sharing accommodation with others,
and it creates more spending, which is good for the economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Alone
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Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...ccommodate others who are living with them. This can reduce the stress of having t...
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Suggestion: Appliances
...ng to wait for others to finish using appliances or equipment that they need to use. For...
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Suggestion: Morning
...inutes on average to get ready in the morning than a person who lives alone. As wel...
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Suggestion: Spent
...lls and therefore more money is being spent. Also, to avoid loneliness, these peopl...
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Suggestion: More
... friends and family, which results in more spending and aids the development of th...
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Suggestion: Who
... to go out in the evenings than those who lived in shared accommodation. In con...
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Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to go out in the evenings than those who lived in shared accommodation. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06620209059 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69807929838 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0032352172 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.4 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219052049386 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102588631136 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465514953724 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654835332743 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593627777628 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.