The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed,
but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what
are the possible solutions
It is undeniable that the web technologies have completely modified the methods of sharing information. However, it has also given birth to technological threats such as hacking and data leak, which could be handled by taking suitable precautions.
The principal problem associated with online information sharing is data stealing. In this era of the internet, various ways have been developed to gain unapproved access to private records. Hackers are now even successful in hacking the top-secret files of high-level government departments. Russian hackers last year, for instance, stole the confidential data of the Central Investigation Agency of the United States and published the same on the public forums. So, it could be easily analyzed that when these intruders are capable to attack the most secure databases, then how simple is for them to do the same to a common man.
To tackle the above issue, information owners need to be proactive in protecting their data. In other words, many firewalls and anti-viruses are available to prevent the hacking attack and protect the information. To illustrate, I have installed an AVG firewall on my system, which worked effectively in protecting my documents. Nevertheless, many times my firewall has shown that unauthorized users have tried to access my information, but the software always identified that and blocked access. Therefore, it is fair to say that proactive attitude plays a critical role in preventing cyber-attacks.
In conclusion, although illegal intrusion is the concerning issue associated with the transfer of information online, the same could be prevented by installing the appropriate tools in the computer systems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51908396947 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10658184606 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2918805205 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106151266466 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396423396982 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660164349738 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614179054519 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438542655349 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.