Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can
be offered?
The twenty-first-century children are more prone to serious illnesses such as obesity which were earlier only meant for grown-ups. A sedentary lifestyle and increasing fast food are the most evident reasons for this situation, and the best solutions for this are launching awareness campaigns about their dangers and encouragement to outdoor activities.
Current generation adolescents are highly attracted to the technology that has made them a couch potato. They spend most of their day playing video games and surfing on the internet. Due to this, they are becoming lazy and plumpy. As per the survey of the Indian health organization, for instance, more than 51 % of children in India are suffering from overweight due to their addiction to mobile games and social media. To handle the problem, parents need to encourage their children to play more outdoor activities, which could boost their energy and stamina and ultimately make them active. This activeness would prevent our young ones to gain more weight.
Another cause is that the younger generation mostly prefers to consume fast and ready-made food. They are fascinated by International snacks such as pizzas, burgers, and french fries. All these items contain huge calories and consequently creating issues of chubbiness in our youth. To tackle the issue, the government should launch a public campaign in the media and schools to educate teenagers about the harmful effects of fast food. It will shed some light on the difficult situation and allow them to be more attentive and honest about it. To illustrate, the said initiative in japan resulted in a 48 % decrease in obesity in their children.
In conclusion, educating youngsters about the evils of junk food, and motivating them towards physical activities are the most practical ways to control the issue of rising fatness among them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27609427609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81655394786 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8969604953 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.466666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120162506132 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356435600804 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447978591791 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702970598954 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403861258763 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.