Advantage and disadvanatahe of vsiitng antartic
There has been significant increase in number of tourists visiting unique places like Antartic and Sahara desert.
Main reason people choosing this place is because of the unique experience it provides. We dont see such kind of hot or cold places in our neighbourhood.
Also, people are thrilled to visit such places because it gives them nice exposure to different experience altogether. Also, there are various winter games available like Jet-Sking which they don't get in and around the neighbourhood.
On the positive note, people tend to know about the issue people face in these kind of places. This one adds value to life because people might get to know about the hardship faced by people living there and also they can contribute something to goodness of the society.
On the other side, tourists are not planned for the travel and they dont have adequate dresses and other accessories as needed. For example, for places like Antartic, you need to have a good leather coat, gripping shoes, wollen gloves, thermal wear and scarf. Most of the tourists are not prepared well and as a consequence, they might fall sick. Other issue with the travel is people get food which they are not used to. Tourist needs to consider all these into account before planning trip to these places.
So, tourists should be better planned to avoid any hassles. As there will be significant rise/drop in temperature, tourist should be both physically and mentally fit to take up this challenge. I would encourage people to visit this place as it gives us unique and great experirnce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07169811321 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48728772232 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6546042893 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.012723509463 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00531350078751 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198812994712 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0132837519688 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297033723984 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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