advertising is influencing people more and more. Is this a positive trend or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and example.
In this modern era, we are constantly surrounded by advertisements in the form of television commercials, flyers and radio adverts. Different people have distinct mindsets regarding advertisements. However, I believe that this phenomenon has brought more superiority likes social and economic benefits as compared to disadvantage to children’s live.
To embark with, there are numbers of positive effects of advertising on society as well on the economy of the nation. Firstly, advertising can help create more employment opportunities. As the demand for products and services increase because of adverts, more people are needed to manufacture, supply, and transport those products and services. Since a vast number of people are engaged in this production activities, therefore, followed by more employments are created in society. Besides this, advertisement can encourage companies to compete and provide new advance products. Therefore, consumers are more likely to benefit from the products that meet their requirements.
Furthermore, advertising inform us about the choice we have and use of these products. For example, Kelloggs’ corn flakes have a variety of flavors for different ranges to offer for different age groups and now also for people want to lose weight, so, give consumers a different choices to select from. So, without advertising we would have fewer choices.
Nevertheless, some people believed that the emergence of advertisements can have detrimental effects on children’s lives. One can not deny the fact that the majority of adverts are targeted at children and encourage them to purchase and utilize products that are not complied with social norms. To illustrate this, fast food companies overrated the quality of their product and tempt children to use such nutrients which lack proper ingredients and contain high level of sugar and saturated fat, leading to chronic health issues such as obesity and heart disease.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against advertisement, however, I believe that positive side of advertisement from social and economic perspective outweighs the negative side. And I recommended that advertising should be regulated and controlled which aimed at children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 285, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'choice'?
Suggestion: choice
... weight, so, give consumers a different choices to select from. So, without advertising...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71176470588 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15026774278 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1934131277 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.235294118 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208862355824 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683356152814 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367158859782 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108751721663 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595533292673 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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