All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion.
India is highly populated country and in modern era, we witnessed number of private vehicles got increased. I agree that, electric cars should replace all cars that burn fossil fuels.
According to my opinion, Electric cars are more effective and far more efficient than petrol/diesel cars. Here firstly, I would like to highlight that electric cars are environment friendly. However, fossil fuels cars are producing toxic gases which are detrimental for health.These harmful substances are not not only harmful for human bodies moreover for animals and plants also. We witnessed, lots of health diseases in past couples of year's in which Asthma,hearts and lungs diseases are common. Numerous dangerous elements and gases are adding into oxygen due to that human life is questionable. To overcome and control this issue, Individuals and families are using air purifier's. It is quite implausible for middle class and poor person to buy such high end gadgets. Petrol and diesel vehicle manufacturing industries are also equally responsible for this unfriendly environment directly or indirectly. According to the recent survey done by one of the leading newspaper found that 70% of mortality rate got increase by air pollution.
Electric cars are faster and much comfortable in respective of fossil fuel vehicles. They are more time saving and less expensive than fossil fuel cars. we can travel smoothly from one place to another without traffic congestion. For Instance, all developed and developing countries are focusing on using electric vehicles. Lots of industries set up is done and huge investment already incurred by United States. China, United States and Japan already introduced electric vehicles and enjoying a benefits out of it. Foreign countries are continuously doing inventions to promote electric vehicles and exempting taxes to concern industries due to that civic life is getting improved.
In Conclusion, I believe electric vehicles are more human and environment friendly because its distinct features are dwindling pollution and providing comfy experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.565625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8350329997 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621875 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7966872116 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7368421053 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223426650462 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068391246719 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122997641524 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146203940063 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110424908812 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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