All parents want the best opportunity for their children. There are some people who think schools should teach children skills but others think having a huge range of subjects is better for a child's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
Everyone considers schools as the most preferred institution for learning and overall development of a child. However, there are some who believe that the learning at schools should be skill-based, whereas, others prefer schools to focus on subjects for the development of their children.
Skills play an important role in a child's future. Being skilled in a particular activity can be pursued as a carrier path. However, skills can also be taught at home by parents who possess knowledge of basic skill-sets. For example, a musician can tech his child the basics of music. But teaching subjects can prove to be a difficult task for the parents. For instance, it would be difficult for a musician to take a subject like physics or mathematics as they may lack the in-depth knowledge required to teach the subject.
Schools, on the other hand, are better equipped to deal with a range of subjects as they have specialized teachers for each subject. Further, there are certain elements of learning which can only be covered through subjects such as history, science and technology, amongst others. Although, the schools should also focus on extra-curricular activities such as sports, paintings etc. as they can provide better infrastructure for such activities.
Accordingly, in my opinion, the learning institutions should ideally focus on a balanced approach between subjects and skill-based learning and let the children decide for themselves the best course for their future development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32911392405 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95223597816 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8661226096 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31557024569 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116125498952 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720325588585 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199780414346 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400335403513 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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