Recently, there has been a lot of news talking about companies deducting employees’ numbers of vacations, and people are discussing whether this is right or not. Some people think that this is the punishment for those employees who made almost zero contribution to the company, but others are still holding their own opinion tightly. From my own perspective, I strongly disagree with these types of punishment, since all humans deserve equal treatment and all work deserves the same rewards.
Every human deserves equal rights, so people should have the same amount of basic employee benefits. Since the first group of black slaves had arrived in North America, they were treated unequally and brutally. For example, in a southern state in the United States in 1840, blacks were required to work 14 hours on the farm with no salaries or vacations, and a lot of them died during these heavy duty jobs. After those slaves were free, new laws were made to provide equal rights for every human being. If an employer are deducting those employees’ vacation days, he/she is not giving every employee’s equal rights.
In addition, every worker should have their basic worker’s right. Employers should not compromise those basic employee’s benefits written in the law. During those workers’ lives, there must be a day or a week when they might encounter/meet some kind of emergency. For example, there was a woman worker who was pregnant for 9 months, and she should have rights to stay at home and be prepared for the birth according to the law. But her employers still required her to attend the company, and even used deduction of her salary as a threat. This woman realized that the employer had already flouted the law, so she sued his employer, and of course, won the prosecution.
In conclusion, it is important to know that every worker has their own human rights and worker’s rights, since stipulated vacation days are also written in the law. Employers should not use any reasons to violate their employees’ basic human rights and basic worker’s rights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 437, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
...of punishment, since all humans deserve equal treatment and all work deserves the sam...
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Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
...the same rewards. Every human deserves equal rights, so people should have the same ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00289017341 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57428801856 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2153530971 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14910258016 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501834362026 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443085293585 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919305333932 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518198931265 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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