It is an undeniable fact the major democracies of the world are involved in strengthening their space missions rather than spending major chunk on research related to human health improvement. I agree with the notion that money should be spent in judicious manner.
To start with, firstly the world is suffering from epidemic diseases like HIV, Cancer and people from every part of the globe are falling ill to such prevalent health evils. Therefore, it is the need of the hour to spend money on finding vaccination as prevention is better than cure. Secondly, developing countries like India and China who are growing to become superpowers should emphasize more on providing basic amenities to all sections of the society. According to world health organisation, number of infants dying in these countries are on rise since they are deprived of nutritional food and good health care system. So, it is absolutely uncalled for these nations to invest more on science and technology.
On the other hand, space programs do have some positive aspects as well. The research can aid in various fields like weather forecasting, predicting the pattern of tsunamis and as well as finding some useful resources. Moreover, since the non-renewable energy sources like coal, petroleum and some mineral ores are getting exhausted so it is high time to look for alternatives on planets other than mother earth. In addition, it can be beneficial to accommodate growing population on blue planet to other heavenly bodies providing these planets have atmosphere similar to planet earth.
To sum up, I would say that at this juncture it is critical that human should be saved from the jaws of widespread health hazards. After all, in a healthy body resides a healthy mind. Hence, money should be spent on other causes like health and education.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'after all', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'to start with', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26443768997 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.16717325228 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100303951368 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0364741641337 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0334346504559 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145896656535 0.122226691241 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0668693009119 0.0403226058552 166% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69984610556 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0395136778116 0.0326793684256 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00303951367781 0.00163938923432 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.0790273556231 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.021408717616 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00303951367781 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1834.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09302325581 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372093023256 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272425249169 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189368770764 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129568106312 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69984610556 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.1615412512 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6612614648 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 0.814263465372 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 48.7425249169 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 2.01282051282 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364349997263 0.332605444948 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0873496822547 0.102741220458 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0614110438729 0.0668466124924 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530355487977 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113573175099 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15477407278 0.134430193775 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832123488616 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276381363394 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0776343878718 0.0638462369009 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261863328742 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05991237808 0.058150111329 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.