Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that newspaper will maintain the most important position in sources of news, regardless the fact that the number of people read news on the Internet is rising day by day. I totally disagree.
The main advantage of online news is the convinience. Nowaday, with a smartphone, a laptop or a tablet, we can read the news anywhere, anytime we want, without carrying any newspaper on the hand, which is not convinient for most of the time. For example, when I have an interview, I'd have some time to kill, then I'd take my phone, surf web and read news, obviously I wouldn't carry any newspaper in that situation.
And the interesting part is when we read the news on our phones, let's say, the phones will show us other articles related to the article we're reading. For example, if you're reading something about Trump, your phone maybe recommend you other articles about him and his decisions. That's a great feature of online news that newspaper will never have.
Also, we cannot ignore the fact that news on the Internet is mostly free. For millionares or super rich people, it's not that big a deal. However, on the other hand, it's a huge difference for other people who don't have a lot of money.
In conclusion, I believe online news is affirming its role nowaday. It will soon become the most important source of news, replace newspaper in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64876033058 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45896935557 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1451067067 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331779140421 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123468217356 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108343420418 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207505836821 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092934108108 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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