Although more and more people read the news on the internet, the newspaper will remain the most important source of news? Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Reading news over the internet versus newspaper is debatable. It is often argued that the newspaper will stay the primary source to get news compared to other means such as the internet. I partially agree with the statement, the newspaper will be one source of information, but the vital mode to get news would be the internet.
To start with, there are certain persuasive arguments why the newspaper will continue just one mode of information. The prime reason is that people of the old age group would like to read a newspaper as they don’t know how to run a computer via using the internet facility at home. The second reason is that the newspaper will be a cost-effective way to procure information, and it would cost approximately $1 per day instead of having a monthly subscription. Therefore, people would give preference to read the newspaper to avoid financial trouble at the month-end. A recent article suggests that 25% of newspaper sale has decreased in the last two years because young people have changed the trend to read news via the internet. The last reason is that it won’t harm the eyesight of the people as it has an easier print which is suitable to read on paper.
On the other hand, the internet would take over the newspaper shortlisted due to various reasons. Firstly, the internet provides 24/7 news and it covers a range of information across the globe which would enable people to know what is happening in a remote country like Panama while sitting on the other part of the world. Secondly, having internet facilities along with smartphones gives a quick notification to read emergency news such as earthquakes, terrorist attacks, and weather updates instead of waiting a whole day to get a copy of the newspaper. The third reason is that people would be busy in the coming years; therefore, they would prefer to read online news while completing their assigned tasks as a replacement to flip over one by one page.
In conclusion, although print media will continue as a key part to spread the news among old age groups as it would be cost-effective and less harmful, I presume the internet would be a prominent way forward for people to read the news as it provides super-fast, accessible and round the clock news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, while, in conclusion, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85309278351 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7378219519 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.817265607 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306829349041 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126996829016 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682808785195 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221201537663 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734825553111 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.