Although you have never studied computing, you have always been interested in computers – you buy magazines about them, and you have taught yourself many skills on your computer at home. You have just read a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for those people who have studied computing at college or University.
Write a letter to the Enrolment Officer asking if you can enroll, explaining your circumstances and asking if he/she will make a special exception for you
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express an interest in a computer course which you gave an advertisement in a magazine last week. I really want to take this course due to the high demand of my area and future career.
I am a business student and have completed B. Com and major was accounting. As I mentioned, I have not any skills of computer due came from poorly rural area were lack of advanced technology. I am eagerly interested about enrolling in this course as there are no institutions in my area. As you mentioned, if someone wants to take this, they need to have completed an elementary course. However, since I have not been skilled with computers, it would be possible to make a special exception for me to enroll in the course. Additionally, Certification of computer basics is already done by me. I would request you to kindly consider my request and to give an exception to grab this opportunity. It would be really appreciated if you are enrolling me in this course.
Thank you for your kind consideration and hope to hear your positive response soon.
Yours faithfully,
Najam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...demand of my area and future career. I am a business student and have complete...
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Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse soon. Yours faithfully, Najam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71065989848 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8648965514 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8144461944 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3846153846 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323451252544 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100817840895 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571558468083 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201281324548 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588296213515 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.