Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, celebrities are constantly followed by papparazi and media. They are being watched over to create a buzz of news by the publications. In the Following essay i will be discussing and arguing about media interference can invade life of famous people and stating my opinion.
Celebrities have often use media as their channel to influence people to a greater extent. famous people try and create spicy news which can create headlines on social media to attract people and increase thier popularity. in such cases media playing major role for publishing such articles round the clock on all channels. one such good example would be wedding of famous cricketer Virat Kohli and actor named Anushka Sharma. Although, wedding was a low key affair held amongst closed family and friends, the couple ensured that they gave enough gossips to the media to hype the wedding all over the news. As a result, Soon it turn out to be a big fat wedding and actors were flourished with many followers joining their fan club across the globe.
On the other hand, Media often intervens in celebrity's peronal life to an unsuitable level which causes damage not only to their image and spoiling career but also affecting their mental health. Recently, many such incidents have occured where media interfered in celebrity's life has resulted in turmoil in their career. For instance, Actors like Sushant Sing Rajput were harassed by media involving in their personal life much deeper and revealing information which is not otherwise necessary to be unveiled to general public. As a consequence, few weeks after the news airing in the media, actor had committed suicide from depression and ruined career.
To conclude, Media is always behind famous people for generating news for their article and many people may fall prey to this which can affect their private life in either way. In my opnion, Media shall always draw line with their involvement in any celebrity or star people personal life and treat their in similar way whether they are celebrity or normal person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03216374269 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45008477955 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602339181287 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9948834165 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.733333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242139165763 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854260615175 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521540274978 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162586236565 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421705057949 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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