You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, children are affected by plethora of diseases which are wide spread and soon convert into global catastrophe. Some believe that regulatory bodies shall be legally abide to parents to immunize their infants whereas others say that it shall be every individual’s choice to vaccinate their children. I completely agree that a proper law shall be enforced in order to eradicate diseases from the children and following paragraphs shall explain my view point.
To begin with, people are usually not serious about some diseases that are affecting child’s health. If certain diseases are not sought after immediately they can soon take a huge impact and spread as viruses within young toddlers. As a result, diseases will not die out and create global pandemic scenario. For instance, Nipah virus which caused a pandemic like situation in the United Kingdom was a mere negligence of some parents to immunize their children before they turn 5 years old. Nearly half of the young born in United Kingdom were infected in year 1987 as per Times report due to the wide spread of this virus and had shattered whole country for such a huge loss.
In addition, government regulations can create awareness within people to establish streamlined vaccination as per guidelines issues. Even though rights of community to choose for their children will not be implemented government regulated vaccine programs are deeply investigated and tested for human utilisation after several years of trials. It will not only guide doctors and parents for effective immunisation programs but also create awareness on bigger level for implementation. Taking into account the same example of Nipah virus if prior laws by government had abide people to vaccinate, it would have saved millions of toddlers from falling prey to the virus.
To conclude, Vaccination plays a vital role to safeguard a child during their initial growth age. Although immunisation to children shall be their guardian’s decision, government regulations will abide them to follow immunisation policies to blanket outburst of viruses and also generate awareness for proper medical treatments.
Comments
Hi. Nice essay. Some grammar…
Hi. Nice essay. Some grammar errors.
Where are you from?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35398230088 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76460831674 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3257883202 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115000200664 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427442693992 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027919198595 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725350927532 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265027009239 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.