Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advertising has a vital role to play when it comes to buying of items. Many say that advertisements lead us in a way that we get attracted to purchase the products even if we do not need them. I completely disagree with this statement and in following paragraphs, I will be explaining my point of view.
Firstly, advertisement is a best medium through which companies can sell their products to mass people. Many a times we are even not aware about the products that are available in market. In this case, sellers publicize through various modes and create awareness about the products that are newly introduced in the market. For instance, recently I discovered that Samsung has launched a multi-purpose vacuum cleaner that can provide comfort in our day to day life to whole new level. They next day I purchased the product and within a week I could sense that this gadget had reduced my work to one fourth time that earlier cleaning used to take. It made my life much simpler and productive that I could give my time to do other things. This made me realize that sometimes newly invented products shall be advertised heavily to reach its benefits to maximum people in community.
Moreover, it also depends on human tendency of buying products which are available over the counter on regular basis. There are products marketed by companies which are renowned worldwide but if it is of no use to any particular person they will definitely not purchase them. For example, if someone is living in a country where temperature hardly falls below 10 degrees Celsius in winter, it would be of no use for that person to buy any woolen clothes even if it is sold by multi-national brands. Hence purchase requirement of the products are majorly derived by the perspective and requirements of the buyers and not by advertisements.
To conclude, advertisements contribute to enhance our knowledge about various products available in the market which in turn can make our lives trouble-free. In my view, publicizing about products via media is necessary to create awareness about the products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...int of view. Firstly, advertisement is a best medium through which companies can...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...ell their products to mass people. Many a times we are even not aware about the product...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...if it is sold by multi-national brands. Hence purchase requirement of the products ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89830508475 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85255910155 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.857834988 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257751093435 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808933314834 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610395485158 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159755145285 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470205143472 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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