Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that artists should unlimited rights for expression of their vision and viewpoints. I totally disagree with this notion, because it may violate other people's rights and increase tension in society.
First, it is true that it is essential for a creative person to have the freedom to express their feelings and outlook on life. This is because any creative process is an artist’s reflection of surroundings, as well as a creator has to be able to think outside the box in order to produce a unique object of art. However, I cannot agree that their freedom should be without setting bounds. The main reason for it is that artists might express a radical point of view and by doing it, they might offend other people feeling. For instance, it was an installation where Jesus Christ was depicted in an inappropriate environment covered in blood. Thus, this kind of creations would definitely evoke a negative response from Christians or other groups.
In addition, some works may form a negative perception of reality and promote violence as well as crime and death. Almost everyone is aware that beauty is in the eyes of a beholder as well as the approach towards reality is completely depends on an artist. Unfortunately, their creations are not always inspiring and appealing. That is why some artworks should not be available to the common public and should not hurt somebodies feeling or provoke people to commit a crime. In fact, I believe that an artist should have a certain code that would cover what is appropriate for art creation and what is not. As well as, I am totally convinced that the main goal of an artist should be drawing the attention of human beings towards the fragile beauty of our lives and inspire them to live brighter.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that freedom of art creation should not have any limitations and artists free to express their feelings no matter what. In contrast, I think that this kind of latitude would have negative consequences and may result in acts of violence from different groups of the population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, kind of, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85393258427 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6636797858 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522471910112 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4065965507 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332021658142 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106716346081 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880005962783 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210713121127 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443645903564 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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