Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Being a public figure comes at the expense of constant privacy invasion. Yet, there are fruits to fame which make its problems irrelevant or least-disturbing. A commonsense assumption would be that if dealing with fame detrimental effects was such a burden, we would have had fewer and fewer celebrities, which on contrary, is an ever-swelling number.
Asking for others constant attention and the desire of being at spotlights is hard-wired into our genes. One needs to look no further than babies to find out that the desire for constant attention could be observed in them who have not been under the influence of media, and thus, is their instinct. Celebrities, no different from the rest of us, enjoy the pleasant feeling of being loved. Irrefutably, the ones who benefit from being constantly admired and loved possess more self-esteem and are more likely to have a positive self-vision.
Although fame is not necessarily synonymous with success, being famous is the ultimate goal of a vast majority of celebrities as it would result in financial prosperity. Billions of yellow magazines are being sold worldwide so that people know what product celebrities are using or where celebrities pick for their vacation. Celebrities have many sources of income and their everyday life is one of them. Advertisements are solely based on the influencers’ life and the more popular they are, the richer they will be.
Public figures experience a life which is partially theirs and they have to deal with paparazzi following them all the time. It appears to be a sweet deal, however, when we take into consideration what they gain in return: Popularity and prosperity surround them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15272727273 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97182360466 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.203623729 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207489204944 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714747204859 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409995859214 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113296290804 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622867966981 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.