Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Famous people live in the constant glare of media and fame brings with it both benefits and drawbacks. Even so, in my opinion, the advantages of being a celebrity outweigh the disadvantages.
The main problem of being a well-known person is excessive public and media attention. They are followed by media everywhere they go, this adversely affects their personal life. The general public wants to know about their personal life, this encourages media to publish every bit of their life. This can sometimes lead to problems as celebrities are normal people and they may have some flaws like everyone else and they cannot conduct themselves perfectly at all times. For instance, recently a famous actor expressed his discomfort when one of his fans attempted to take pictures with him during a concert. The media inaccurately published this news and the public instantly jumped to the conclusion that he was an arrogant person who could not treat his fans with respect. Such incidents may destroy an image of a prevalent person.
On the flip side, there are many more advantages to being a celebrity. One of the biggest advantages of fame is that it opens the gate to wealth. The actors, cricketers get immense opportunities to earn huge amount of money. National and international companies hire them to endorse their products. Celebrities also have considerable influence on society. The followers listen to them and follow them blindly. Celebrities can make a positive difference to the world by lending their support to various causes betterment of society. For instance, the biggest Filmstar Amitabh Bachan worked as the Brand Ambassador for the awareness campaign to eradicate the problem of polio.
In conclusion, the main disadvantage of being a celebrity is a breach of privacy. However, being a celebrity gives enormous opportunities to earn wealth and power to make a positive change in society to make it a better place to live. Hence, In my opinion, being a famous personality is more advantageous than disadvantageous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ersely affects their personal life. The general public wants to know about their personal life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, well, even so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18429003021 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90401009195 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570996978852 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.161408988 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261340492019 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735744778374 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665149885867 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163698288262 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509965044062 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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