People sleep less than they used to in the past. what are the reasons behind it? what are the effects on individuals?
People sleep fewer hours than they did many years ago. This is because they tend to work longer compared to the past and this results in fatigue and various diseases in people. This essay is going to discuss how the cutthroat competition in work encourages people to work hard and how this phenomenon of sleeping less will affect people's life.
To begin with, people tend to sleep less compared to the past because the job market is more competitive than ever before and workers have to get more work done or they may fall behind or be replaced by someone else. The cost of living is becoming expensive rapidly, therefore people need to work more to earn more to spend on food, education, and healthcare. Additionally, people equate their happiness and contentment with the money they get from their work because they want to live a luxurious life and enjoy all the modern facilities.
This trend has negative effects on an individual and on communities associated with the person, as less sleeping hours can cause depression, fatigue as well as many health problems which affect the productivity of a person. People get less time to relax and always feel tiredness which adversely affects their attentiveness to their work. Moreover, as people have to work hard they have to get up earlier and do not return home until late in the evening, consequently, they are left with few hours to spend with family. This greatly affects their relationship with their family members.
In conclusion, it is clear that people want to be competitive to secure their jobs or to fulfill their needs. The changes in sleeping patterns have a negative impact on individuals' health as well as in their personal life. I hope people will understand the importance of adequate sleep on their health as well as on family life and change this habit of sleeping
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Less
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89556962025 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55367590255 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7399152753 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224750974204 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091970916762 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564354065294 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143497686404 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030822003869 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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