Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?
Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent women. Companies should be required to divide a certain percentage of these positions to women.
It is an undeniable fact that in many countries there are more women than men, still, there are few women at the higher managerial positions in companies. Some people opine that certain senior-level positions should be reserved for women. In my opinion, the selection of an employee should be on the criterion of excellence not on gender and there are some sectors where women are not interested to work. This essay explains the reasons behind not supporting this view.
To begin with, reserving jobs for women will not help companies to have a competent workforce and have adverse effects on their productivity. this may discourage women from working hard and enhancing their skills because they will feel secure for their jobs. Additionally, there are some sectors where women are least interested to make their careers such as engineering and Airforce, therefore, allocating an amount of seats may result in some seats vacant or hamper excellent candidates from acquiring these positions.
There may be some other ways to make sure that women also work in companies at higher positions. Most women leave their job because of their family responsibilities or they need to raise their children. Instead of making a reservation for women, companies should make sure work-life balance for women by providing them some time off when their children are young or give them work from home facility. In this way companies need not compromise on excellence or the positions will not be vacant.
In conclusion, making a reservation can cause harm to the companies in terms of excellence, therefore in my opinion hiring candidates for higher positions should not be based on gender and to make sure equality in workplace companies should help better work-life balance for women.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
... adverse effects on their productivity. this may discourage women from working hard ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20245398773 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74062202259 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493865030675 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4276061703 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356489286515 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160369306581 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172223159658 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275543642244 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.256536827215 0.056905535591 451% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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