Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
People are often debating whether grand perks are important or job fulfillment is relevant. I believe that it is relevant to have a desired job than grand salary as it motivates the person to reach the apex of his profession and money cannot afford to purchase the happiness, which one can get by job fulfillment.
Having a desired job keeps the person elated leading to the senior position in his profession. Because when one engages himself into the profession like engineering, sales, medical science, sports or journalism according to his target profession. It is likely that he upholds the zeal, which helps him in accomplishments of his goals and he may be also able to show his innate skills in the job. Given the opportunity, it may be possible that in the foreseeable future, he may emerge as the top face of the organization. For instance, as per survey conducted by Indian management school in pune in 2001 clearly proves that student who opted in their target industry and profession had built their careers successfully and in long term, reached to the big salary and in addition, also gained signification position in the corporates.
Moreover, materialistic attitude towards the job cannot fulfill the desires and consequently he can neither make a significant contribution nor he can gain the considerable income in the longer term. In the past many sports players and musician did not stick to their usual schedule of office jobs. A famous cricketer of India Mr. Ms Dhoni left his government job to pursue his career in the cricket and over the years, he has become the icon in the world of cricket. Famous musician. Mr, Abdul Rahman in India also left his management position in the corporate and started working in the local group as a supporting musician. He followed his passion instead of money and today he has just not won the awards but also ranked as second expert musician in the classic music by the music industry of India.
To sum up, It is necessary to stress on one’s passion to pursue the job instead of materialistic attitude because one can make a meaningful contribution in life and individual can gain job satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89945652174 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84780404696 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546195652174 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3559486386 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.692307692 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3076923077 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957448616837 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032844197726 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403859643684 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749214013506 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523914776246 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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