Your brother cannot come on a trip that you planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to join instead. Please say
– Where and when do you plan to go?
– Why can’t your brother come?
– Give a short description of the trip.
Hi Peter,
It’s been a long time since we met each other. I believe that you are enjoying great health.
I would like to invite you to join us for the trip. This trip includes sight-seeing in Kulu manali, right in the center of Himachal Pradesh., profoundly called as Queen of the hills. Besides that, I also intend to visit Manikaran Sahaib. I am planning to organize this trip from 01st June to 03rd June 2019.
I realize that it’s a short-notice to join for this trip. Let me tell you that on the last moment. My brother have turned seriously ill, he is suffering from dengue and doctor had advised him the complete bed-rest. I also think he should take rest to get recovered.
We will be travelling initially to Kulu Manali. As you know we are facing the wave of heats and it is a best place to get the relief. This places offers the scenic beauty and there are many adventures we can experience like mountaineering, paragliding, Trekking and water sports. In addition, Manikaran houses the additional features from the landscapes and shall give us the opportunity to visit the blessed land, showing the features of ancient mythology. You can see the waterfalls and not to mention that the water of this land keeps boiling for 24hours and there is no polluted particles, in spite of human dependence on these natural resources.
I believe that you cannot resist of visiting these place and I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Ram Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h other. I believe that you are enjoying great health. I would like to invite...
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Line 8, column 102, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... are facing the wave of heats and it is a best place to get the relief. This plac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...This places offers the scenic beauty and there are many adventures we can experie...
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Line 8, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and water sports. In addition, Manikaran houses the additional features from the ...
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Line 8, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itional features from the landscapes and shall give us the opportunity to visit t...
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Line 10, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...annot resist of visiting these place and I look forward to hear from you soon. ...
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Line 10, column 78, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...isiting these place and I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely Ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, in addition, you know, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77906976744 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6036617953 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4619495443 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5294117647 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198855536949 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601698224103 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532123231689 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959511605982 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309080402151 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.