In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Old age is an inevitable phase of human life. In the recent study, need for more nursing homes is ever demanding. Generally when a person reaches the age of 70-80 plus, then they prefer to move out of their homes and start living in an old-age home. However, I argue that the government should pay for the care of such people. The first reason is that some people are too old themselves to pay for such care of other family members and the second reason is that few families cannot afford to take up this responsibility.
The government must pay for the cost of nursing homes because some family members are old enough to bear this amount. A couple of others countries have a large number of the ageing population despite healtier lifestyles and advanced medical facilities. One such example is of Japan, it is predicted that their 1/3rd population in 20 years will turn over 70 years. Which means 70 years old people will have to pay for such services in future for their elderly parents. Therefore, I believe that such expenses should be borne by the government.
The second major reason is the financial background of the families. It varies from each family to family. Some families cannot endure these expenses. While in some cultures it is natural to take of elderly members. Sometimes this stress from taking care of them leads to financial, physical, and psychological abuses on their old age parents.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that the government have to bear the cost of the care of the aged because either other family members are themselves old to pay or might not afford the cost. Therefore, the government should roll out pension system for the care of elderly citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... families cannot endure these expenses. While in some cultures it is natural to take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78114478114 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48631712277 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1284044414 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5294117647 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384419781239 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114590440981 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100664626064 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238625677225 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839295310934 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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