In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Undoubtedly, demand for elder care homes are tremendously increasing in today's world. Many people are forcing old age person's to shift at caring home. Some experts believe that government should pay the expenses of old care houses, while others are of view that the charges should be beared by family members. I will discuss both views with examples.
There are plethora of reasons for children paying expenses for parent caring. To begin with, it should be the duty of family members to devote some part of earnings and time towards them. If the children have a right to own parent inherent property, taking responsibility for caring eleders should also be their duty. For example, Bollywood movie "Baghban" has shown the truth about the life of parents after retirement. This film won the Oscar award and is shown in many countries to aware people about the truth and difficulty faced by individuals after becoming dependent. Government should teach a lesson to the young generation by collecting hefty fees for caring a family person.
However, management could also be held responsible for running of old age home. Various countries have appointed many NGO's to work for a noble cause of Elder care home. Although, aged people are not earning earning recently but were working earlier and contributing for the country by paying taxes. Moreover, authorities can pay some part of taxed income towards betterment of caring home's or otherwise apply for a loan from center.
In hindsight, I opine that burden of paying fees should be on government and blood relatives of the aged person. Both should contribute some part towards the benefit and management of old age homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1119133574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67624708857 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4154992599 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353902651472 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117123635573 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510782614039 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220165351987 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623093772152 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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