Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
The development of the Internet has affected most aspects of our daily lives. One major influence of the Internet is the ever-expanding online shopping. A vast majority of people nowadays are choosing to purchase products online, from everyday necessities like food, groceries to book, airplane tickets. Many people are concerned about the drawbacks of online shopping poses, though I believe the benefits of this popular service outweigh its disadvantages.
Initially, the online shopping brings forward great convenience to buyers. Specifically, they can save time and plenty of effort when choosing to shop online. The time required to travel to and from stores is significantly reduced, especially when buyers live far from their desired shopping locations. Purchases can also happen in a few seconds when buyers only need a few clicks to confirm their purchase through credit cards.
On the other end of online shopping, service providers, or sellers can also benefit greatly from online shopping. Security is the first aspect they can ensure through online shopping. To clarify, online shopping helps shop owners avoid pesky customers who try to steal when buying directly at shops. Furthermore, shop owners who provide online services can cut back on employees’ payments, since only the shippers who deliver the products are needed to be paid.
Undoubtedly, online shopping still possesses certain drawbacks, like the long delivery time or the uncertainty about certain products’ quality. However, such disadvantages are fazed by the great beneficial values of online shopping. Considering the constant development of the Internet, online shopping will continue to grow considerably in the upcoming years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59770114943 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82983328669 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1817063286 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11535571746 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042744116445 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329482721193 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759097112673 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379541207748 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.