Recently, buying things online have become popular between different age-group of customers. Although there are several merits to perches products on the internet, there are some demerits that make shopping online too hard.
There are three negative aspects which can make people thinking before online shopping. First, internet security is the most concerning problems. Nowadays, newspapers and the other media have published variety of strange news about hackers who steal the account information of the bank clients. It is becoming more serious this days, and most people hesitate to buy products and tickets online. Second, people always find the online goods are constituted from inappropriate material or size. It is happened when people could not touch the material or examine the products such as cloths and shoes. The third problem is related to those who want to exchange some products. In this situation people always face with hardness and difficulties. The companies mostly refuse to exchange products or sometimes it takes a long time to exchange a thing.
On the other hand, buying online have its own positive effects. There are too many websites on the internet that sell particular goods. It is always convenient comparing prices and characters of products in different online websites. Furthermore, online shops always put discount on their products, and people can provide whatever they want with a cheaper price than the goods which is sold by conventional shops. Moreover, buying online can save our time. it is clear, most customers go shop to shop for buying something, and it is undeniable that it takes a lot of time. Thus, online shopping can reduce the amount of time that we spend on choosing and buying some products.
In conclusion, in contrast of different disadvantages about online shopping, there are some positive points about buying a thing on the internet. I have preferred to buy various ranges of products online, due to the online comparisons, discounts, and other merit which is laid behind online shopping.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, third, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24012158055 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61675826249 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6789201101 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165014605881 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532393291754 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05801287043 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109406213012 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222498183148 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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