Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
The advent of the Internet has considerably had the most significant effect on everyday life. One of the consequences of development of the Internet is the ability of buying things through the Internet while there is not required for customers to present at stores. Also, it is becoming more and more common among people to research online for their demands. Although, purchasing on Internet websites has some drawbacks, especially in terms of stolen bank account information, the advantages of buying thing through the Internet outweigh the disadvantages, if it is under surveillance and its security is potent.
It is said that Internet websites have sometimes been attacked by hackers and the clients’ information, especially their credit cards and bank account data, has been stolen even these websites have a great security level which can be a major threat for people who use the Internet to buy their needs. Further and more importantly, though, when people want to offer a product on the Internet, they do not have an ability of touching or checking the materials used in products and the accuracy of products health until they receive the products. Otherwise, proving clothes or checking their size and colour is essential for choosing a cloth which is not possible for online buyers.
On the other hand, time is considered as a crucial factor in modern life and people are always struggling to make some leisure time having some pastime or entertainment. When they can quickly buy what they want through the Internet with some clicks at home, such as air ticket, groceries, books or etc., E-commerce can play a crucial role in this situation and it be more common and widely enjoyed in society. When there are many websites that offer same things in different looks or prices which people can quickly check and buy their needs through the Internet, why do they waste their time in traffic jams or in a walking to search such a thing from a shop to another?
In conclusion, although buying things on the Internet has some disorders in security, it has some benefits that can be considered as a vital role to save daily time. All in all, in my point of view, the pros of online shopping outweigh the cons by providing admissible security.
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Recently, online shopping has
Recently, online shopping has been widely publicized and widely used by many people. Everyone is interested in purchasing items such as books, clothing, cosmetics,... because its diversified many items. And in this article we will analyze the pros and cons of online shoping
First of all, to have a general look at the disadvantage that the buyer may encounter. Fraud and scammers will be everywhere to trick you and steal your money. Online shopping is no exception. A typical example of that is a website pretending to sell some famous items with a cheaper price and after receiving he trust from the customer they will make those customer transfer money to them with compelling reasons. For example, this item is too expensive and they have to import goods with with their own money so make sure we receive the goods they will require us to transfer money to them. Like that they can get the money without further action. That's ascam. To make sure you do not cheated by them we will recommend the great sites sell online such as Amazon, E-bay or even Alibaba. They're all the reputation website. This is crucial information for anyone who is willing to buy online
On the other hand, online shopping has been offering a lot of advantage for those who like shopping. The first advantage is convenient, just a simple click we can get the items that we want without going outside in a bad weather. We just need to stay at home and a shipper will bring our good come to us. So simple and easy to use. The other advantage is that because internet companies do not need a shop so their product often cheaper. People come to online shopping because the prices are attract them, lower price with good quality. Hardly, had anyone find an online product exceeding its retail price.
To conclude, buying online for most wanted items such as books, air ticket, groceries,... has advantages and disadvantages. i think both of these thing convince me a lot but the advantages might be more outweigh than the disadvantages. think if you shop online many times you will easily avoid the bad circumstance. I hope everyone will have a nice purchasing experience online, in a safe amusing manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26618705036 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.158273381295 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0575539568345 0.0946595960268 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479616306954 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431654676259 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129496402878 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.052757793765 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67848765656 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0191846522782 0.0326793684256 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10551558753 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119904076739 0.021408717616 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0263788968825 0.011925033212 221% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2253.0 1933.35771543 117% => OK
No of words: 381.0 316.048096192 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91338582677 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356955380577 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270341207349 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194225721785 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0997375328084 0.137316102897 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67848765656 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511811023622 0.56093040696 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.6460124732 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 31.75 20.7743622355 153% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5814094505 49.517814964 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.75 127.492653851 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7743622355 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 58.7841207349 49.1944974215 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.79807692308 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515495352849 0.332605444948 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149971417576 0.102741220458 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0755648188242 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621890526851 0.534860350844 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1432790967 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223450511417 0.134430193775 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866117182389 0.0742795772207 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366939882731 0.324371583561 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0763072032478 0.0638462369009 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336793276887 0.228012699653 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902754153997 0.058150111329 155% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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