Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Throwing parties can be expensive. While some people do not find these fancy parties worth what they cost, others believe parties are important to both individuals and the society.
People choose to throw parties for a number of reasons. For starters, parties can make better teams. Project kick-off parties are good opportunities to break the ice and help team members to know each other better. Victory parties create a sense of success and belongingness. Companies do not see parties as waste of money and allocate budget to support such events. Moreover, parties often leave good memories. From our own experiences, we all have happy memories of our birthday parties when we were little. Every family has great photos which were taken on family parties in their album. In addition, contrary to what some people believe that spending on parties is a waste of social resources, parties actually create value, either by employing people in the party planning business or by offering people better party experiences.
The popularity of parties, however, causes some tension in the society. Parties are hard on introverted people who find themselves uncomfortable in parties. This is a clinic symptom which psychologists call “social anxiety disorder”. There are other ways to celebrate important events that may have greater value for their cost. For instance, companies could send out gifts after successful projects and parents could take their children on family trips to celebrate birthdays.
In my opinion, while a party is a form of social event that brings many benefits to individuals and the society, other choices should also be considered, either to cut spending or to relieve the stress of those who are not fond of parties.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.296529968454 0.247107183377 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.154574132492 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0914826498423 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0283911671924 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0315457413249 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0977917981073 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0157728706625 0.0403226058552 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.70627876099 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347003154574 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00315457413249 0.00163938923432 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.0757097791798 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018927444795 0.021408717616 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0283911671924 0.011925033212 238% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1749.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22419928826 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4128113879 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302491103203 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192170818505 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106761565836 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70627876099 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 65.3032890674 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5294117647 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8377853336 49.517814964 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.778522085 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.91176470588 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385448975382 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0761324478523 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0485914075277 0.0668466124924 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.456954780852 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19244325293 0.148594505496 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131933281249 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714267244385 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303849638442 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0475291884032 0.0638462369009 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264132599013 0.228012699653 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292564876064 0.058150111329 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.