Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In every aspects of life, individuals always have a different opinion. some believes that celebration of small event is important in today hectic schedule, while other think money should be spend wisely. In today era wedding party, birthday celebrations are also consider as status symbol. however a fair amount of believe that spending a lot on wedding and celebration in just a waste of money although some believes these are necessary for society. in this topic we will discuss both the aspects.
Firstly, economy status of individual play an important role including other their social circle, social status etc. some people consider that spending a lot of money on celebrations shows your family status. Lavish wedding, destination wedding are in trend now.people expensive wedding planner
to organise their wedding.
Secondly, being in long hours working job, people didn't have much time to organise the celebrations at their home even if it is a small birthday celebration. however they prefer to organise the celebration in a five-star hotel or a famous restaurant. they believe that money can buy anything.
on the other hand some believe that spending a lot on these celebration are waste of time as it is not an easy to earn money. To some extent I am agree with this notion because trends change every second. In country like india where goverment jobs are very less, most of the population are working in private sector. people stay away from their family to earn bread, unhealthy life etc style.
In the above discussion I would say it is totally depend upon the personal preferences how people want to celebrate their birthday wedding et. other aspects also effect this like economic status,social status etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14436619718 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61629670161 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7632626355 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336474038437 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995557249921 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912523253002 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14702340178 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115064224204 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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