Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
One of the profits of improving IT is the ability of buying things online through the Internet. It is becoming more and more common among people to search online for their needs. Although, in my opinion, buying on Internet websites has some drawbacks, if it be under surveillance and its security be powerful, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Although websites have a high security level, it is said that they have been sometimes attacked by hackers and the clients’ information, especially the credit cards and bank account data, has been stolen. In addition, when people want to offer a product on the Internet, they do not have the ability of touching or checking the materials used in products and the accuracy of products health until they receive the products. On the one hand, proving clothes or checking the size and their colour is essential which is not possible for online buyers.
On the other hand, time is an important factor in modern life and people always want to make some free time to have some fun or to have entertainment. When they can easily buy what they want with some clicks at home, E-commerce can be more common and popular in society. When there are many websites that offer same things in different looks or prices and that people can quickly check and buy their needs through the Internet, why do they waste their time in traffic jams or in a search from a shop to another?
In conclusion, although buying things on the Internet has some disorders in security, it has some benefits that can be considered as a crucial profit to save time. All in all, in my point of view, the pros of online shopping outweigh the cons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...rnet websites has some drawbacks, if it be under surveillance and its security be ...
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Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have sometimes been
...gh security level, it is said that they have been sometimes attacked by hackers and the clients’ in...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'so', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25078369906 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.169278996865 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0564263322884 0.0946595960268 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0282131661442 0.0501214627716 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0532915360502 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131661442006 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0470219435737 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52586903996 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0219435736677 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.1065830721 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012539184953 0.021408717616 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025078369906 0.011925033212 210% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1664.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71821305842 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33676975945 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233676975945 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175257731959 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0893470790378 0.137316102897 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52586903996 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 51.8466244497 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4545454545 20.7743622355 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7471749273 49.517814964 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.272727273 127.492653851 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7743622355 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.814263465372 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 49.822243049 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.7125 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463733372463 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133064436589 0.102741220458 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0499529262126 0.0668466124924 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.615943832681 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0979076650726 0.148594505496 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211269943759 0.134430193775 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733764358692 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349411428703 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0609005057506 0.0638462369009 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323735789459 0.228012699653 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091276319179 0.058150111329 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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