The people are being engaged with purchaising products and servises virtually. I think, despite of having some demerits of this tend, the benefits are far more.
One the one hand, those items and services people purchase over online cannot be bought in a shop. For example, the mobile phone which has been made in USA is not possible to buy in person to the people of Bangladesh. However, they can order it online and receive it via cargo. Moreover, if a patient is asking for doctor's advice and prescription, sitting at home, he simply have to make a call and tell the illness he have, the dortor will give him advice and medicines so that he can get rid from diseases. Furthermore, In terms of purchaising tickets of bus, train or even plain, we can go through their web sites and make it happen. Last week, for instance, i bought a ticket of train to go to Dhaka sitting at home, and thus, i saved my money which i might need for go to station.
On the other hand, there is a chance of being fooled by the dishonest businessman. To illustrate, if someone ordered a original product, they might not receive it or might receive the duplicate one. The same thing happened to one of my friends, he ordered a brand new mobile phone from a website, however, when he recieved it, he realised that it is a copy phone. As a result of this his whole money was wasted eventually.
In colclusion, I believe that though ordering online bear a chance of being cheated, it is a great way to have something whatever you want. So, people sould be aware while purchasing things virtually, and take the advantage of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The people are being engaged with purchaisin...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mobile phone which has been made in USA is not possible to buy in person to the ...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...rescription, sitting at home, he simply have to make a call and tell the illness he ...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... to make a call and tell the illness he have, the dortor will give him advice and me...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ake it happen. Last week, for instance, i bought a ticket of train to go to Dhaka...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...or instance, i bought a ticket of train to go to Dhaka sitting at home, and thus, i s...
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Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... go to Dhaka sitting at home, and thus, i saved my money which i might need for g...
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Line 3, column 756, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... home, and thus, i saved my money which i might need for go to station. On the...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sman. To illustrate, if someone ordered a original product, they might not receiv...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t, he realised that it is a copy phone. As a result of this his whole money was wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52397260274 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51224016142 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9281171905 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778019373771 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274863862737 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314168077202 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535802832046 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228330661135 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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