In this era of netizens, everything is possible and when it comes to shopping or transport booking, the advantages is beyond the expectation. Hence, shopping from the internet is gaining its popularity day by day. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages when it comes to internet benefits.
There are mainly two advantages of internet. Firstly, we can save time. We do not have to wait in the queue while buying the air tickets and also there is no need for searching a book store to buy a book now a days. Because, we can get this things by sitting on the computers at our home. For example, we can buy any books from the online shopping store like Amazon and Flipkart and in addition, we can by our groceries from Big-Basket. Secondly, the online sites are cheaper. In other words, buying things from the internet stores are very much cost effective. We can compare the prices of books, groceries in the various online shopping stores and we can choose the cheapest one. For instance, as the official GRE book price is 10 dollars in Amazon when it is compared with Flipkart 12 dollars price, people are buying this book from Amazon due to its cost effectiveness.
Conversely, there are also some disadvantages of online shopping. Mainly, when it comes to the quality of the product. We can not verify the quality of groceries when we shop from online stores. For example, we can check the product freshness with our bare hands in the local shopping market but we can not have this option in online shopping. Moreover, sometime online activities are more complex. If we have to buy air tickets from online shop, we have to fill some details by ourselves and if we make some mistakes, it leads to further trouble. For instance, if we put the spelling of our name wrongly in the website, we have to follow a long process in order to change the name.
In conclusion, we can say that although there are some challenges for online shopping, it can be overcome easily with little concentration and product verification.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...or searching a book store to buy a book now a days. Because, we can get this things by sit...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...earching a book store to buy a book now a days. Because, we can get this things by sit...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a book store to buy a book now a days. Because, we can get this things by sitting on t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73314606742 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63662614665 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480337078652 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3206878648 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.65 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173216827948 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638026696235 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508785745014 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106668546845 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745281785064 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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